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week 4 review

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           In Deidre's paper on gymnastics i found it passive. She the narrator was the agent of this selection. Wonderfully explained but a little to wordy she could have cut out some pieces

that to me personally felt like were repeats of what had already been stated. She does do very well though on detail and the transitions of her story. Gymnastics it sounds like she is great at

her sport, although she sounded doubtful when irgury occurs as does every athleate.

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