Marissa, very to the heart i like the way you opened up and compared yourself to sustainability. Transitions were a little rocky but i could get around them. I liked the opinion of everything you came across. Seems like you tough a lot about it and it shows very well put together and you related everything back to yourself and the human race. I loved the tone you have in the paper very imformative and expressive yet not angry like you want to hurt your reader (vibes I can get from newspaper editorials). I enjoyed reading it an A in my book. -Alex Moser