I read the essay of Sarah. I was very interested to hear about the new products being offered in the clothing market. She talked about how our clothes could be "going green". That is a great thing to hear now that we are running our of places to throw things out. From her paper i can tell that she obviously is interested in her topic, she know a great deal of information about it, and lastly she cares about her topic enough to do further research on it. Those are three very important things a writer shows dedication to what they are writing about. Sarah also used great wording i never saw any words really being repeated besides essentials. Her transitions were very impressive always keeping me hooked on what i was reading wanting to learn more and more until she was done. Sarah, shows a strong passion for writing and shows she is quite good at it as well. I give it an A, i could tell a lot of hard work was put into it. - Alex Moser