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It's so funny because I think about that all the time. I walk into a store and see a shirt that says in big letters GO GREEN or PROTECT OUR ENVIORNMENT. It makes me laugh because what did it take to make that shirt? How many chemicals and toxins went into our air when the industry was making it? I really like that you chose to speak about this. You had a very good flow in your essay and used "pathos appeals" in your writing. You do the same thing I do, when you write you write with emotion. If the topic is making you fustrated you can tell by the tone in your writing. Awesome job. I didn't see any errors in your writing. Overall I really enjoyed it.