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Jamal Reviews of Deidre

Page history last edited by PBworks 3 years, 5 months ago
I enjoyed reading your essay about your gymnastic years. I didnt now youd had such an amazing talet. I like how u put the different levels in their that was nice. But to me it felt as if the essay started to get a little reppeative. So for your essay i am giving you a grade of a B. If you work on this essay a little bit more i know it will be great.

 

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