Alex Moser

What is your thesis? How did this particular argument come about?

Pollution has become a problem not just for the generation of today but for those to come. I see sustainability as a way of improving our lifestyles. This argument came about because it is something that is being over looked. I also found it interesting so read new ways that pollution is being battled.

Who's your audience and what techniques do you use to make your writing speak to their concerns and interests?

 My audience is anyone who loves sports and is interested in cleaning up the world to make it a better place for future generations.

Upon reviewing your completed composition (and process), what aspect of your work (or it's process) most surprised you?

 I was most surprised on how interested i became once I figured out what i wanted to write. 

Did you learn anything new while growing your composition? Explain.

 Yes i learned a lot while writing this essay. I learned many new advancements in green building an i was most interested in the expansions that it was being taken into the sports world.

When you use secondary sources, do those sources contribute to ethos, logos, or pathos appeals?

 No

When considering peer feedback as you revised your rough draft, which advice/suggestion/question/criticism/edit was most useful/helpful?

 when i was reviewing my paper i took into consideration a lot of my gut feelings. I had others help me prof but they were not from this class because i only had one peer review at least that i could find.

On your final version, where would you like to see the most feedback and attention from graders?

I would like to see the most feedback and attention from graders with my facts and information of how it was presented on account of how interested i found it. I would like them get feedback about my transitions and introduction as well since i struggle with them.