Reflection

by

Rachel Lancaster

     Spencer, Scott, and Andrea peer reviewed my Barriers to Sustainability draft. They all pretty much had the same advice, which was to make each bullet point a paragraph. Considering I was already going to do this I think they are all pretty smart. I liked how Spencer saw my viewpoint. Not many people can look at a situation in a negative point of view the way I do. It is true how people need to realize there are two sides of a situation, the good and the bad. Most people chose the good way. In the draft I seemed to be very nagative, but then in my final draft I switched the point of view slightly to a good point of view. I didnt totally give up on my "career" but I tried to persuade poeple to try to consume less even if it was just a smidge. I appreciated the advice given to me, especially Scotts, and I took all of it into consideration.