Andrea-
-(3 / 3) Can you find the idea/claim/thesis?
Human are looking at a “green" trend and humans effect on this movement.
-(3 / 3) Any grammatical errors?
None that I could find.
-(3 / 3)Can you target the writers use of Ethos/Logos/Pathos?
By showing the statistical facts shows a use of logos and as was said in the cover sheet the use of pathos could be seen.
-(2 / 3) Are there any spots in the essay that could use strengthening?
I completely enjoyed reading the essay and the information presented. Maybe give more of a solution to the problem.
-(3 / 3) Is the essay accessible and easy to navigate?
Easily found and navigated.
-(2 / 3) Do you want to actualize any of the goals presented in the writing?
One of the only spots in which I believe the essay could have been strengthened. A better described solution may have strengthened the essay.
-(3 / 3) Did you learn anything new? OR Do you have a new prospective on the writers topic?
I have heard a lot about this topic but so I would have to say yes that I have a new prospective on the presented topic.
GRADE: 19 / 21 - Word Count - (1314)
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Suraj Jani-
-(3 / 3) Can you find the idea/claim/thesis?
A.I.! The main idea I believe was whether or not machine can have the ability to think for itself.
-(3 / 3) Any grammatical errors?
I could not find any.
-(3 / 3)Can you target the writers use of Ethos/Logos/Pathos?
By showing the statistical facts shows a use of logos and as was said in the cover sheet the use of pathos could be seen.
-(3 / 3) Are there any spots in the essay that could use strengthening?
A goal or solution could have been presented to possibly holt the chance of this subject getting out of hand.
-(3 / 3) Is the essay accessible and easy to navigate?
Easily found and navigated
-(1 / 3) Do you want to actualize any of the goals presented in the writing?
One of the only spots in which I believe the essay could have been strengthened. A better described solution may have strengthened the essay.
-(2 1/2 / 3) Did you learn anything new? OR Do you have a new prospective on the writers topic?
I love movie(I, Robot!) and the subject presented so I have had an idea on my look on the subject, so I knew the most or all of the information presented. BUT if it wasn’t me I believe that the information was well presented and that it should but a new prospective on the views of many other readers.
GRADE: 18 1/2 / 21 - Word Count - (2386)
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Scott Kale-
-(2 / 3) Can you find the idea/claim/thesis?
A bunch of environmental issues! It may have been better to present a single claim that breaks off into the rest of the ideas.
-(2 / 3) Any grammatical errors?
Conclusion and over consumption were both spelt wrong.
-(3 / 3)Can you target the writers use of Ethos/Logos/Pathos?
There is a ton of statistics so I would say there was a presence of ethos.
-(3 / 3) Are there any spots in the essay that could use strengthening?
I enjoyed the essay and the way it was presented!
-(3 / 3) Is the essay accessible and easy to navigate?
Found right on the cover page.
-(3 / 3) Do you want to actualize any of the goals presented in the writing?
I would love my son’s son to enjoy a better environment then I did, so I hope that some goal is reached.
-(3 / 3) Did you learn anything new? OR Do you have a new prospective on the writers topic?
A lot of issues and a lot of information so there was a lot to learn and a lot to take in. I have a new prospective on the increasing and disturbing issue presented
GRADE: 19/21 - Word Count - (2770)
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