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Jakub's grade - Scott

Page history last edited by Jakub Garbacz 15 years, 6 months ago

You improved your rough draft significantly, and your final draft is really good. I still disagree with some of your points (including global warming), but I must agree with the others, especially with those about resources shortage and recycling. Amount of data you included in your final draft is impressing and it really adds to the logos and ethos of your paper. The word choice was good, and your thesis statement was well adressed. There were some problems with the sentence structure and the flow of the paper in the "Overconsumption" section, but the rest was practcally flawless. In the end, it was a pleasure to read this paper.

Grade: 24.5/25