Review of Roshi7's stuff

Good stuff here Phil. I would like you, however, to really develop what sustainability means. You do a lot to point out the devaluation of terms such as sustainability. However, because you seem to focus on sustainability in particular, I would like you to do more with it. After throwing off the facade of the manipulation of these terms, perhaps you could build it up into something more real. I guess what I want to see is the full development of a definition paper: present the problem in definition, break it down, rebuild in your own image. However, I understand that this is in a larval stage. As such, my comments are something of a moot point as I'm sure that you intend already to elaborate: perhaps even in the areas I've mentioned. I would do the same as some of the other reviews and critique your grammar and writing style but I don't feel qualified to really improve your writing in this sense in any real way. I'll still, however, give you the stock comment that the whole E Prime thing might improve the reader's interest in your subject area. I wish I could be mores specific, but like I said... still in its larval stage.